Bugs: There are some bugs with booleans and images not appearing but I saw that these problems are mostly resolved now.
Strengths: The story is interesting and I would like to see how it ends. I also like the setting of it being in Norwich. Plus: "Oh hi Marc". The train ending is my favourite.
Weaknesses: It's pretty short but the ending isn't finished yet so I know there will be more to it. I found it a bit confusing to go navigate too.
Changes or improvements: The images would definitely add a lot more to the game, so it would be good to get those working.
There are a lot of grammatical errors, such as spelling mistakes, missing commas and random capitalisation. Considering the game relies on text, I strongly suggest getting that fixed.
How to improve
Since your game is set in Norwich, you could take some photography in order to provide visual aid for the player.
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Bugs: There are some bugs with booleans and images not appearing but I saw that these problems are mostly resolved now.
Strengths: The story is interesting and I would like to see how it ends. I also like the setting of it being in Norwich. Plus: "Oh hi Marc". The train ending is my favourite.
Weaknesses: It's pretty short but the ending isn't finished yet so I know there will be more to it. I found it a bit confusing to go navigate too.
Changes or improvements: The images would definitely add a lot more to the game, so it would be good to get those working.
Bugs:
Multiple coding errors
Strengths:
Great build up in story and giving the player multiple options for a different ending
Character speaking
Weakness:
It is hard to rate without the code working and the imagery needing to be fixed
Changes/Improvements:
Add some pictures and look through the coding
Bugs Describe briefly and accurately any bugs (errors or problems) you spotted in your test
Bugs with some of the links to other scenes (market square) - I am also stuck in a loop of the police officer following me.
Strengths (visual style, animations, sounds, gameplay) What are the best parts of the game?
Storyline is strong
Weaknesses (visual style, animations, sounds, gameplay) What is the weakest part of the game?
Grammatical errors and buggy links, also no imagery
Changes or Improvements Are there any (small and reasonable) changes or improvements you would recommend?
add some imagery and fix the issues going on with market square etc.
I would also go back and fix the grammatical errors.
There are quite a few bugs, with some coding being shown. However, I think the storyline is interesting and cool!
Bugs
Major bugs in market square
Strengths
I see a lot of potential in the plot
Weaknesses
There are a lot of grammatical errors, such as spelling mistakes, missing commas and random capitalisation. Considering the game relies on text, I strongly suggest getting that fixed.
How to improveSince your game is set in Norwich, you could take some photography in order to provide visual aid for the player.